Friday, November 27, 2009

Death Of A Soul Comments

Rating: 5.0

Caught in between two different me's
Two different personalities
One that wants to succeed
While the other one fell through the crack
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Karly Jaye
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Chinedu Dike 09 January 2017

An insightful poem with beautiful rendition of words. Thanks for sharing.

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Serenity Prayer 27 November 2009

i can totally relate. great job expressing your emotions. keep up the good work! !

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Nicki Faith 27 November 2009

that was a deep poem very nice

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Steven Aragon 27 November 2009

That was sick. very emotionally provoking. I felt every line and it flowed easily. I enjoyed it. Thank you.

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