On a wintry night
That looked deep and dark
The sleepy streets disturbed
With stray dogs that bark
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Great imagery throughout this poem, fast paced and intense! I especially liked this line: Aware of his poetic pen that lies motionless as he is. Poignant, captures the eeriness of death as described in these lines: The last breath he draws Nobody senses but the spooky night that perturbs no sleep only peeps the secret fall. Awesome poem, Moloy! ! Thank you for sharing it. RoseAnn
Heartfelt rendition with strong emotions in passionate reflection set aside for sober reflection. Well conceived and wonderfully penned. Thanks for sharing Moloy.