Tuesday, July 10, 2012

Death Of A Perfect Day Comments

Rating: 3.7

She smiles at me through crimson skies
with passion burning in her weary eyes.

This day has a perfect aura
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Godfrey Morris
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Far Lapenna 05 December 2013

Your use of language in this poem stands out compared to the many other poets I have come across - a truly delightful read.

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Melody Thaila Kuku 12 July 2012

I love the way you made use of personification. I think this is lovely Godfrey.

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Godfrey Morris

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