Friday, March 11, 2016

Death Of A Moon - Part 3 Comments

Rating: 5.0

Finally moon regained its senses
And started showering its beam
In the colourful pack
And showed its true beauty
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M. Asim Nehal
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Michael Jack 28 October 2021

Wonderful, beyond anything, master creativity.

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S H 24 September 2020

And the moon is inching towards its course of life. This is making the series fascinating now. Top class poetry with creative thinking.

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Juhaina Tumlu 23 February 2019

Now this is making me more intrigue to read further, what a fascinating tale, Brilliant.

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Deepak S S 26 December 2018

Your moon is still alive I am happy to read it.

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Deepak S S 26 December 2018

You are keeping me on my toes with your every part, a creative writing.

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Loke Kok Yee 19 March 2016

Lovely Asim, so happy to see the moon still alive

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Darren Jkoeryo 18 March 2016

Wonderful series man, I enjoyed it.10

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Aarzoo Mehek 17 March 2016

At last the moon made it's impact on it's surrounding with all it's moods. A journey worth waiting to complete. Thanks for this beautiful poem Asim. Nothing less then 1000

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 March 2016

A little bit! With the muse of the Universe. Thanks for sharing.

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Kelly Kurt 11 March 2016

There was a beautiful crescent moon last night. The rest of the disk was illuminated by Earth's reflected light and I thought of your poems in this series. Thank you

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