Death Of A Moon - Part 2 Comments

this one is making the series more interesting now i can't wait to read next.

Very interesting poem. I will read all parts now.

This part is even more intriguing and the series seems interesting now.

We have so many heros available to us to write about. You've chosen an unlikely one for your series and so far you've absolutely nailed it. This is one of the more intriguing pieces I've read. Personification of astrological bodies had been done before in mythology but never quite like this. You've got me hooked, I'm off to read part 3

goon! go on! don't leave us hanging. what happens next?

go on! go on! don't leave us hanging. What happens next?

Great Series Man, enjoying it.

With courage and determination in life. Nice work.

I was eagerly waiting for the continuation... and now I understand why the sea reacts to the phases of the moon. Let the sea rise and fall to the gimmicks of moon. Just loved this imaginative thought.10 plussss

Wow the way you move the lines just purely sentimental, i love the passion and the darker tone you set here, it a bit dark (in a good way) , beautiful thought and yet so natural..loved it

The moon is responsible for the sea's tides and the romantic's tides as well

A beautiful imagination nicely penned.