Death Of A Moon - Part 1 Comments

Brilliant write. Creative and innovative thinking.

Fascinating poem. Appealing to me.

Creative genius. You glorified moon

Brilliantly written poem. Creativity at its peak. I will read all parts.

What a fantastic creative poem, I missed it earlier.

Fantastic beginning, such a lovely imageries created by words.

A fairy tale but with substance and touch of reality.

Creative poem and seems good series.

The suspense is killing me, continue please

Interesting and creative poem man...10, Do not ket me wait more for next

A nice imagination, liked the poem and the story narrated.

Wonderful poem Asim.. I guess this poem is about creativity. Most artists would agree that they can create only once in a while.. Like the moon appears only once in its full shape, the creative faculties of an artist also comes out once in a while in its full strength.. The artist then creates their art and wonder where did they lose their inspirtation.. Wonderfully crafted. Thanks for sharing.

Wowww. what a creative work. You have spun a delightful tale around different phases of the moon. Looking forward to part 2. A 10 for your great imaginative power. loved it.

I fervently await the conclusion. The patient and compromising moon will do what's best

A vicious game! With creativity. Nice work.

wowwwwww creative write yo..now can't wait for the part2 I hope the moon can outshine the schemers and plotters and shine to it's fullest all over again. Till then lets enjoy the changing facets of the moon. beautiful poem.10+++

Great poem aout the moon and your feeling about it is so wonderful.Thank you for sharing.

Creative story....waiting for part 2 Asimji