Thursday, March 17, 2016

Death Of A Moon - Concluding Part Comments

Rating: 5.0

Today when I lay down on a cot
Under the marigold tree
The moon was rolling slowing
Playing with clouds and stars
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M. Asim Nehal
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S H 24 September 2020

What a fantastic ending to this creative series. I admire your creativity now.

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Juhaina Tumlu 23 February 2019

Creative genius, congrats for this wonderful series, loved it MAN.

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Deepak S S 26 December 2018

A Masterpiece Indeed, no words can describe the beauty of this series, you kept me guessing every time. I thought it will end in 2 or 3 parts but you did justice with every part of it, Thanks and God Bless you.

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Mike Smith 22 March 2016

It's is all of it brilliance! What a fascinating story. What great images and perspectives. Love that you did this in a series as well. The suspense definitely added to the storyline. You are truly a master at your craft. Thanks sincerely for sharing this with all of us

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M Asim Nehal 23 March 2016

Thank u so much for taking out your precious time and read the complete series. I really appreciate your efforts and comments. Thank u once again.

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Loke Kok Yee 19 March 2016

Thank you for the happy ending, great imagination and writing on your part.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 March 2016

Creativity matters a lot with imagination. Making mind silver color attracts attention of galaxy. Very interesting and thoughtful sharing.10

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Aarzoo Mehek 17 March 2016

What a beautiful creative and imaginative picture of the moon... A journey in itself surpassing all the hurdles and shining it's brightest putting to shame the once who wanted to see the end. This is how life sums up for all of us. Beautiful story with hidden message of survival. Loved the conclusion of this journey of the moon. Sometimes marks seems difficult many many compliments and 100 plusssesssss.

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M Asim Nehal 23 March 2016

Thank u Arazoo for your comments and support.

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Kelly Kurt 17 March 2016

Our ancient time-keeper, the moon, adorns our sky and paces our lives

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Edward Kofi Louis 17 March 2016

The moon was rolling slowly. Answering the ways of life with the muse of your imaginations. Nice piece of work.

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