I’ve given it my best.
The years frown back
from the mirror
to show me just how long,
...
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Great poem; keeps one reading to the end. I like the way you write statements not rages. Read mine – When Love Dies - Adeline
Apologies can no longer reboot trust the only time I’m happy is when I’m alone. loved reading twice
The realization of your true feelings left me feeling I was reading an honest poet. Wonderful piece of work.10/10 Ian
Agree with the previous commentors. Murmurs softly and painfully true to anyone who has gone through such a thing. But believe in reincarnation, for the soul will live again and love again, too. -chuck
Even in sorrow your talent and wisdom shines. Some excellent phrases here CJ that I have been accustomed to reading in your poetry Loveya poeticlady Rusty
A real 'HIT' of a poem. Wonderfully expressed and a superb read. So aptly explained, no one could have done better. Excellent write. Excellent poet. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX
A ten for the poem, a ten for the honesty, a ten for the truth, a ten for knowing what the heck you are talking about, a ten for being able to see that it wasn't always all bad, a ten for knowhing that it is finally over (read my poem on the very same words! !) , a ten for seeing, at the very end, that is was a death, just the same as if our physical bodies had gone...Thank you, Dear C. J., for one of the best things, the most brutally and honestly written, that I have read lately. To my favorite list, a thousand tens, and copies to keep....and to share with others who have suffered the same. Thank you...Linda
An excellent channeling of difficult feelings without censorship or excuse, just acceptance. you make the name Poet one we can all be proud of.