Wednesday, February 13, 2013

Death Of A Dream Comments

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Some people say it's made out of fluffy pink candy
clouds of it just floating about aimlessly
you can hop on it
travel to a veiled land we call La La
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Melpomene's Tears
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Kelvin Owusu 20 February 2013

this brings out a pre good question... nicely written

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Ruth Fumble 14 February 2013

Good question! I quess we just have to drean somemore.......

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Little King Of Sorrows 13 February 2013

I enjoyed the explanation of this poem as much as the writing itself. May desire never R.I.P., and be reincarnated with time over and over. Inspiring write. Thank you.

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