Death Of A Day Comments

A very beautiful philosophical poem on the shortness of life and its journey towards death.Each stanza gives an indication that death is the final destination of all. Liked it. 'Life is but a chain of light and shade, The garland of life is idle dream, The passing day is the song of death, Poignant pain it gives with the bird's song.'... is so nice. Thanks for sharing.

Brilliant piece of poetry about life and death. I agree with Jennifer Birch....Until the morning brings new life! 10

And the morning brings new life. Great poem Prabir.

Another fantastic poem! !

" The day died with painful trance and dream, The valley plain and hills become proof, Witnessing mad dance of drongos, bees, Life is painful does seem like death sings" Nice poem and nice picture..Love you and your poetry very very very much😊..My Master..😍

" Nature is a big Mirror image, It is True yet it is very much False, Joy of life is ephemeral; false, Death is Truth with pain unbearable" 100000000000000+++++++++

Poignant and intense, but sometimes I wish he would use the word Night instead of Death. Very involved with Death. Perhaps exchange it for night in some of the lines to be less scary and depressing,

Life is but a chain of light and shade, well penned. Mr. Gayen.A beautiful poem.