Thursday, July 14, 2016

Death Of A Bird Comments

Rating: 4.8

I never knew he is going to die,
He never, but his soul will fly,
The beautiful male born in a cage,
Now you will fly in the blue sky.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Loke Kok Yee 17 July 2016

to have love by your side at your final moments- can't wish for more thank you sir for the tear in my eye-10

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Anil Kumar Panda 17 July 2016

We cant stop death but it is very important to be taken cared by someone we love. Charged with emotion this is a very nice poem. Thanks for sharing.

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M Asim Nehal 15 July 2016

Death is inevitable, all born will taste the death.......A nice emotional poem.

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Khalid Saifullah 14 July 2016

A sweet emotional and well penned poem.

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Kelly Kurt 14 July 2016

A sweet corollary. I once had many birds that I cared for...and also once thought I'd like to end my days in someone's arms

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