Sunday, September 11, 2011

Death Needs Me Comments

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Absence of death, just teasing me
Leading me there, to only bring me back
Watching my life, slipping through the cracks
Entice me with things I want
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Allemagne Roßmann 16 September 2011

Very poignant write and matured hand in poetry

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Stefanie Fontker 12 September 2011

Mixed signals are quite annoying. Too many seem to kiss and then kill. Great poem, I really like the way you've narrated this.

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