Friday, October 10, 2008

Death/Love. Comments

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Death,
what does it have to offer?
Freedom.
some of us think..
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Dislocated Heart
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hidden poet 18 November 2008

wow this is so very powerful. the wisdom that is contained in these stanzas is rare from someone who is only 16. very good. hope and love are the only ways to freedom. wonderful insight on life.

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Julie Neises 10 October 2008

A strong write. I wish more people on the verge of breaking could see hope as an alternative.

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Haley Russ 10 October 2008

Nice, nice.. good job.

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