Monday, July 23, 2012

' Death' (Loop Poem) Comments

Rating: ★2.9

Procreation is a gift
gift shared in marriage

Marriage is sacred
sacred defines life
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Marvin Brato Sr
marriage
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Mike Barrett 28 December 2013

I agree with Valerie's comment. Good write!

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Doris Cornago 27 December 2013

I like the structure of this poem best. I like your imagery, although I prefer they would be more brightly colored. You are so somber for one so young. Why is it?

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Valerie Dohren 24 July 2012

Loop poems are new to me - very good write.

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Marvin Brato Sr

Marvin Brato Sr

Davao City, Philippines
Marvin Brato Sr
Marvin Brato Sr
Davao City, Philippines
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