Monday, January 18, 2010

Death Is Peaceful Comments

Rating: 5.0

This poem is dedicated to my dear friend 'Merna'

Is death a curse or a gift?
I know it's something our shoulders can't lift
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Reem Ehab
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Omar Ibrahim 19 January 2010

this poem is good.i liked some of the rhymes.but i think the title is not very encouraging for a reader to read it.you can choose any thing which is more happy than that word because the poem is not that sad...i suggest things related to rest in peace or something i think it will be more encouraging.but i liked the poem overall. thanks for sharing.

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Merna Ibrahim 18 January 2010

REEM, I AM REALLY OUT OF WORDS! ! THIS POEM IS SO TOUCHING, IT REALLY MOVED MY HEART! I REALLY APPRECIATE IT AND I REALLY I HOPE YOU WOULD KNOW HOW MUCH I LOVE YOU..YOU ARE REALLY A GOOD, LOYAL AND FAITHFUL FRIEND :) THIS DEDICATION MEANT TO ME A LOT! THANK YOU SO MUCH GOD BLESS YOU..YOU TALKED ABOUT A PAINFUL ISSUE, I HAVE TRIED IT AND YOU EXPRESSED IT PERFECTLY AND I TOTALLY AGREE WITH YOU IN EVERY SINGLE WORD....MERNA.

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