Death Is Patient Comments

Nicely written, Toyiring. Thank you

come and proof your worth

'papa your end is near (i smiled) take these pills and kill your pains', but death is what i desire i said, why are you far off? .... come death. i wish death. come............. sad, poem.. but you are trying to express existential problems of life, death, desire to die, problems.......... very nice poem. thank you. tony