Monday, January 7, 2008

Death Is Only..... Comments

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Death is only the beginning
It is the start of all creation
Death is only the end
It is mankinds damnation.
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Tressa Carliss
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Rupa U 14 January 2009

Although I don't WRITE poetry I do enjoy READING good poetry, especially in the structured style. This poem is one of those that appealed to me, on this website. You have balanced the Contrasts well. Yes, death is the end of life, but is also the beginning of another life for the soul. Congratulations on a well-written piece.

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Bonnie Collins 07 January 2008

Tressa, very well said, Death is only the beginnig of yet the END of life..... BonnieCollins

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