Death is not the end of life,
See a caterpillar he first learns how to crawl,
And then when he learns it perfectly he dies,
But only to fly,
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wow diiiii.........its an e.g. of a different thinking... thinking about life after death........... with a beautiful imagination.............well done.........diiiiiiiiii
A well crafted poem Ma'am! I wrote a poem named Reborn on the same theme some time back, but had it deleted at an insane moment.! I suggest humbly to revise the last two lines? especially both are ending with 'life'. Please do write more!
The poet’s evident ache and anguish finds expression in short meaningful verses… Personal losses are so excruciating and agonizing….. it’s a tribute to ones spirit to convert it to verse and then one with an overt message of hope Very nice liked
death is not the end of life, but just the beginning. lovely write Nikita
Hi Nikita, This is the first time I have come across your poetry. Very Nice, erudite and effusing lot of positive energy. well done. Write more and share.