Tuesday, July 30, 2013

Death Is Not The End Of Life Comments

Rating: 4.8

Death is not the end of life,
See a caterpillar he first learns how to crawl,
And then when he learns it perfectly he dies,
But only to fly,
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Nikita Dutt
COMMENTS
Unnikrishnan E S 28 June 2016

Hi Nikita, This is the first time I have come across your poetry. Very Nice, erudite and effusing lot of positive energy. well done. Write more and share.

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Shraddha The Poetess 01 March 2014

wow diiiii.........its an e.g. of a different thinking... thinking about life after death........... with a beautiful imagination.............well done.........diiiiiiiiii

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Utsav Patel 05 September 2013

Deep indeed... Well written...

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Chandini Jaswal 27 August 2013

Crisp and short! Very lovely indeed!

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Kavya . 26 August 2013

nice positive thought

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Aswath Raman 24 August 2013

A well crafted poem Ma'am! I wrote a poem named Reborn on the same theme some time back, but had it deleted at an insane moment.! I suggest humbly to revise the last two lines? especially both are ending with 'life'. Please do write more!

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Saadat Tahir 18 August 2013

The poet’s evident ache and anguish finds expression in short meaningful verses… Personal losses are so excruciating and agonizing….. it’s a tribute to ones spirit to convert it to verse and then one with an overt message of hope Very nice liked

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Nikita Dutt 06 August 2013

Thank You ma'am for reading it.!

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Heather Wilkins 06 August 2013

death is not the end of life, but just the beginning. lovely write Nikita

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Nikita Dutt 31 July 2013

yes life after death.. thanyou for reading it..! !

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Poet's Fan 31 July 2013

nice thought, , , a life after a death, , ,

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