You have killed me.
So many times before.
Broken me.
Murdered me.
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Right, thats exactly the attitude you need to make something out of life! Good job! Keep it up
your age, and the lines in your poem amazes me, if you are truely young as you said, then you are an excellent poet. great work, keep it up
Just what this represents, I do not know, however, I really like that it can be used to say many things.
I can't figure out why I love this poem. Maybe its cause I'm a little morbid or something but great poem nonetheless.