Death is near
I can see black butterflies
Fluttering around
I am dreaming of
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Death is the final journey. A peaceful, happy journey if it is towards God. Top level imagination 10+
Indeed, death is like a parole, a temp freedom. It lets us be with our Creator for a while at least though we have to return to complete our karmic cycle of evolution. I liked this poem so well written.
A well crafted spiritual thought of death and salvation
My heartfelt prayer for your cousin to recover,
What a great poem dedicated to a near and dear one. Death is not presented as something terrible but as a liberation from life's hassles and a merging into the eternity. A positive piece that would bring immense consolation to a dying person. A big 10.
4) ....This masterpiece gives us a crystal clear insight on the circumstances your cousin is in. As we know how much God loves your cousin, He will grant his last wish. I am grateful to you dear great poetess that through your honest poem, this masterpiece, I know the situation your beloved cousin is in. I will pray for your cousin’s last wish May the Lord grant him redemption Amen.
3) ....This poem you created for your beloved cousin IS a masterpiece. This honest, tender poem full of love is heart wrenching and it causes me crying through and through, I cannot help it. Your cousin asks for death to come, so that he will be redeemed from all pain. God is love and He loves your cousin so much that He will fulfill what he asked for.
2) ....God knows what your cousin needs and He will fulfill all your cousin's wishes as I can read from your tender and loving poem, a masterpiece must I say and this must be said.
1) ....Indebted to you of the crystal clear evidence of God’s great Love, weaved in this masterpiece with God all is possible, my dear great poetess. He gives what we ask. The most important person is your beloved cousin.
Death! ! Hope in your heart; Overcoming this war torn World! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
I just hope and pray, dear ate Rose for your cousin’s recovery from chronic illness. Nothing is impossible with God, like what He did to King Hezekiah. But of course, let the will of God be done. My best wishes to your cousin, ate Rose. Well penned poem...10++++
The poem is pouring feelings all over, so feelingly writ. And yes, death is liberation, every death, and at the end of the last death, the death of Death, Liberation, the journey is over.
everlasting happiness.....lovely poem. Thank u, dear poetess. anjandev roy.
I should now welcome my death and depart from here, I don't know where, but hope a better place somewhere! May God bless your cousin with health and a long life!
Well-constructed poem. But, somehow I do not like it’s theme. It is easy to say quits, Lose one’s spirits But one should fight All evils. Embracing death Is no solution.
Such deep beauty in this! .. Ever so heart moving! .. Beautiful songs! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing! .. Ever so many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ........................+++++ Very inspirational thoughts! ..
Heart touching, deep wrenching poem, through all words about death, yet beauty of words, of tnder words prevail here, tears are flowing, yet this poem is three years ago created, but still very touching me as the reader. Most deserveing poem for myriad Stars