Monday, January 8, 2018

Death Is Meaningless For Pakistani Soldiers Comments

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You blamed Iraq of having chemical weapons
you attacked and destroyed Iraq
the land where glimpses of the ancient civilization
still appear as remains of the flowers
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Akhtar Jawad
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Bri Edwards 28 May 2018

(cont.) ..what this sentimental nationalists can do....maybe these, not this. of course the intent of your poem is much more important than spelling. does the U.S. have eyes for Pakistan now? i don't keep up with 'news' and i don't think it is (know it is) not always credible/believable. have you sent copies of this poem to el presidente, the Congress, and the Joint Chiefs of Staff (Pentagon i think) yet? ? good luck. and God? bless the soldiers! bri :)

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Bri Edwards 28 May 2018

(cont.) ... ** psy·cho informal noun: psycho; plural noun: psychos 1. a psychopath.....SO, Akhtar, maybe you 'want'... Mr. Psycho? ? :) :) to MyPoemList and perhaps a showcase this year? (cont.) ..

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Bri Edwards 28 May 2018

i mainly came to this page in order to add you to my scant and in-need-of-additions Favorite POETS list! that done, i might as well read the poem. ;) ah! i think someone is referring to my homeland: the magnificent (in some ways) (not in others, perhaps) U.S. of America! ! and perhaps Mr. Pscho ** has the first name (this time) of Donald? i won't tell him; he might blush. (continued) ..

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Loke Kok Yee 01 April 2018

You have said it exactly, the ones preaching peace are the biggest perpetrators of war, their economy depends on it. Thank you sir

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Dr Dillip K Swain 13 January 2018

You won the last cold war. You stated there will be no cold wars in future. Remember while signing the charter of UNO on a ship You told the world that there would be no wars in the future. But can you appreciate peace in the world? ....A pragmatic write!

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