Tuesday, July 6, 2010

Death Is Calling At My Door Comments

Rating: 5.0

Death is calling at my door,
Knock Knock not another joke.
This time I'm actually scared.
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Anita Khelawan
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I too am glad that death had the wrong address! A very compelling composition with a happy ending!

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Satyender Saharan 13 January 2016

simple but effective ]]]]]]]! good going thanks for sharing

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Goodboy Nkosi 04 January 2016

Great work! I can relate somehow. I open the door ready to take my last breath

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Seun Bewaji 20 July 2011

you ve done a perfect joy discribing what people went through at death, no one can understand the chilling, fear, and strange things they went through.

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Luz Hanaii 19 July 2011

I liked this poem it was short yet very engaging. Death is always one of my favorite subjects to read and write about. Death is so feared and ignored by most but inevitably we'll all have to meet her.

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Dr Antony Theodore 13 September 2010

Anxieties were expressed well in the first stanzas... until the last line where u said fortunately death had wrong adress. that was the climax and it was excellent.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 12 July 2010

Wonderful Poetry…carried me till last line where it climaxed…’ Shockingly death had the wrong address… Thanks for sharing… Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 12 July 2010

Wonderful Poetry…carried me till last line where it climaxed…’ Shockingly death had the wrong address… Thanks for sharing… Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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