Death is calling at my door,
Knock Knock not another joke.
This time I'm actually scared.
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simple but effective ]]]]]]]! good going thanks for sharing
Great work! I can relate somehow. I open the door ready to take my last breath
you ve done a perfect joy discribing what people went through at death, no one can understand the chilling, fear, and strange things they went through.
I liked this poem it was short yet very engaging. Death is always one of my favorite subjects to read and write about. Death is so feared and ignored by most but inevitably we'll all have to meet her.
Anxieties were expressed well in the first stanzas... until the last line where u said fortunately death had wrong adress. that was the climax and it was excellent.
Wonderful Poetry…carried me till last line where it climaxed…’ Shockingly death had the wrong address… Thanks for sharing… Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10
Wonderful Poetry…carried me till last line where it climaxed…’ Shockingly death had the wrong address… Thanks for sharing… Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10
I too am glad that death had the wrong address! A very compelling composition with a happy ending!