Wednesday, August 26, 2015

Death Is An Illusion Comments

Rating: 5.0

When a day closes its door for me,
with smiles of aurora,
she comes in a windows,
with a comb in her right hand,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Madathil Rajendran Nair 28 August 2015

An indefatigable Romeo you are May the heavens on you Juliets pour Sans abate, so that the undying poet in you Is drowned in a deluge of love

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Valsa George 28 August 2015

'He was a Romeo, He is a Romeo, He will remain a Romeo! ' I salute the Romeo in you! This romantic temperament keeps you young and gives you the inspiration for an endless flow of verse! Thoroughly enjoyed the poem and a 10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 August 2015

Love is the only religion, followed all over the world, and one who is in love, never, never, never dies......So truely and nicely speculated. Great write......10

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Kelly Kurt 26 August 2015

I imagine that it is a part of your culture and your language, and the translation to English, but your words are always fascinating to me. The subtle imagery and the acute sensuality. Being a Romeo probably helps you too.: -) I completely (And as always) enjoyed this poem, Akhtar.

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