Tuesday, January 12, 2016

Death Is A Slit And Life A Slut Comments

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I am sure someone listens to me,
but I don't listen to and I don't see,
Alas! I don't know who he is,
but I think of him, so he should be?
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Akhtar Jawad
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Ayman Parray 16 January 2016

Dear Akhtar Sahib, a wonderful poem. I don't think we are goats for him since he provides us with so much. Death is just a mere transformation, a change of clothes for some and our souls are free to return. I recently came to learn that death is a wonderful experience for most, those who die peaceful deaths or natural deaths. As for those who suffer in this life, the more hardships they endure the more better the eternal life. Thank you for the wonderful and thought provoking poem.

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Kelly Kurt 12 January 2016

For all the goat's adherence and worship, it still met its end. A powerful poem

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Nosheen Irfan 12 January 2016

Another classy poem. You have spoken for all of us here. A very gratifying read. Thoughts beautifully translated into words that we all want to say but often cannot articulate. Big big 10

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Aarzoo Mehek 12 January 2016

We all are in transition period and this world is just one more station... We don't know what is stored for us beyond this world but yes we do go through these unanswered questions from time to time. Thought provoking poem... My compliments...10 for leaving a trail of questions to solve.

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