Death Is.... Comments

What a deep emotion out of this poem..i love it!

I relly know what your saying beck

Great poem Rebekah! ! !

Death is a lingering crow always overhead Death is a soul, done being fed those are Fantastic lines. this is written very well. good job. Becca

hey man i love ur work

i think tht this poem is really emotional gd for u rebekah u are going to go somewhere

really death is a permanent feeling of sadness you have to live with it, nice keep it up.

very very meaningful keep it up.

This poem was really really good. I enjoyed it a lot. I know what it feels like to lose a person and your poem really tell how it feels. Good Job!

i agree this is a really GREAT and i mean GREAT! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

you obviously never lost anyone or you would would know it was so much more it is not just loss and suffering it is a disease that eats away at you until you finally agree with yourself and say that it is all your fault and accept the fact you are a monster

nice you get 10points

people come, people go, why should we mourn for the lost, shouldnt we prepair for the living? ...

we all know what death is but we all afraid to admet that truth and we all try to forget it and go on in this life

I really like this poem it actually says the truth about death...how long have you been writing poems?

I agree death is a ferocious monstre and we all would be in his grip.Good wok

You're poem is awesome. I really liked it.You have real talent.

wow i love it it really is amazing

i luv youre poem it totaly beats mine

that's good It makes me want to give comment ASAP but forgot to log in...