Death In The Jungle Comments

Great rhythm here. This truly is a dog-eat-dog world. In the circle of life, it's good to be on top, but sharks, and scorpions, and snakes and tigers, etc, etc, remind us that even for the alpha predators, death is never too far away.

i really like this poem..macabre subject but well written and good rythmn..think the spelling of' bye and bye 'should be 'by and by'...can you check?