Tuesday, May 3, 2011

Death In My Hands Comments

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Hellow, i took a pen to write a story,
the story that seemed scary,
but liked by those bully,
Now they want another story,
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Khaleelulla Syed 05 May 2011

its a good mixture of words, nice rhythm continue

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Pranab K Chakraborty 04 May 2011

Something shocking can't be the pleasant catastrophe at all. Better you yourself try to be a story...no need of writing then. Regards, pranab

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