Death In A Rhododendron …… [nature; Predator/Prey In-Miniature; Invertebrates; Medium] Comments

He he im alive n kickin, centpeds rarely cause death. Aha n i admire yor observant eye at the food chain eh. But dont yah pee in d garden when u hav a fine washroom ok.; -) . Yor flow n rhyme are enviable here. Enjoyd many lines here esp the innard soup one. I love only such creative fun poems. I tel u other english poets write boring so i dont say it is fabulous unles it realy is. Hey do u hav blac widows there? Im terified of them frm the telly n pics.

good one thanks for sharing and keep writing

oops! i just proofread my poet's note and found that i typed it's for its. i've edited it so it should be corrected soon! bri :)