Thursday, October 27, 2011

Death Has To Wait Comments

Rating: 4.1

Death Has To Wait

Somebody save me, my thoughts are twirling,
The ground is spinning, the ceiling whirling.
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James Casey
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Kim Barney 09 September 2015

James, very well done. I hope your PTSD is now under control and that your family is still together. Congratulations on having this poem selected as poem of the day. Best wishes to you.

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John Richter 09 September 2015

Lovely rhyme and rhythm...

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Kinyua Karanja 09 September 2015

It's not yet hold on and to it. Nice poem

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Ramesh T A 09 September 2015

The symptom of imbalance leading to death one day is very well depicted in this poem!

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K.c. Ford 09 September 2015

Well done for getting it down into a poem, James. I'm sure many will relate to your feelings.

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Smoky Hoss 31 October 2011

Soulful writing, this one makes strong connections with me. Thanks for sharing it James.

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James Casey

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