Sunday, January 4, 2015

Death Has A Crush On You Comments

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That silly phantom all gloomy and dark
he wants your body and will loudly bark

he wants it all til bitter end
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Chuy Amante
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Bri Edwards 15 January 2015

I GUESS we are NOT all as clever as you and your friends are. : ( vis a vis: Death Put A Crush On Me The silly phantom who Mr. Nobody fooled.... had his sights on me. He had retooled. With a monstrous vise in his right hand, he CRUSHed me good; now I'm flat and bland.

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Neela Nath Das 05 January 2015

Wow! Life is a fest.Let's drink the lees of life.

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 04 January 2015

we'll live timelessly no end forever...wonderful verse on death poem. Nicely penned.

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