Death Gets Jealous Comments

This one is so wonderful! ! ! Wow! I love poetry that affects my emotions. You really know how to use repetition effectively.

You write beautifully, Alvin. This is a wonderful, creative poem. I loved the scenarios you used to make your point and the gutsy way you concluded the poem by taking a fearless stand against death. Very well done indeed.10

Thats giving jealous death a good punch in the nose.

thts really good - cant wait to read more