Death Fear It Not Comments

Expression is very clear and well written. Good work

Poem with clarity and clear feelings. Nice work.

yeah death is a right to people everyone has the right to die the real question is did you benefit your life as much as you can during you life i love it it makes death easy witch is to me ;)

you make it sound so easy, but i think what we all scared of is the way to die but not death itself. this is more than a poem, i wud say it's a debate my dear friend. do we all become angels? for the good or bad? mh makes you wonder? no one wants to tempt fate.

Words to think about.

thx for inviting me....^^

yes! 'The death makes angels of us'...or to the Angels hidden inside us grows the wings...and we can fly! Good idea is hidden in your poem Eddy!

death makes angels of us all...a very different thought...10

good lines, well expressed. i like it

Hi Eddie. Thanks for the invite. I enjoyed this!

Hey Eddy I love this. You have yet to learn the less is more principal there are a couple of lines here you could have used it in. the opening stanza needs to be four lies Third line edned at flowers and fourth line is the rest. Eddy yoy'll learn a lot reading poems here and keep writing that's the best teacher. Paddy-----10

loved it, never thought of death that way very interesting

Well you see you can perceive things in different ways and ways you would like it to be so some people see death through a negative prospective but i think there is so much more to it if you really go deep and the best thing about death is that you never know whats coming. Thats why 'There are things know and things unknown but in between are the Doors' and im really glad Aldo u liked this or found it intresting ;) thx alot for the comment.

Interesting. I've always looked upon death as the absence of everything, and winter as a time of sleeping.

This is wonderful, to advice us that we should count on living a good and happy life before death takes us away.

Thanks for reading and commenting on my poems. Read your poem. You have some truly surprising insight there. Adeline

hi Eddy, welcome to poemhunter site. i read your poem. its very nice and thought provoking. keep writing its a gift from God Almighty. read some of my new poems of 2009 and send your comments too. take care

it was nicely done i really like it keep it going....

I'll remember it unto death

good poem eddy.........10