Monday, September 1, 2014

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We keep hens as they lay eggs,
Either we make omelet or boil,
Or let them hatch to their eggs
Chicks to roast or fry with oil,
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Aftab Alam
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Ramesh Rai 15 October 2014

We human; keep the mind of destruction, And nature, calls for love and construction, Beautiful. Nature knows only creation but human knows only destruction. If there be any natural disaster it is also due to playing with nature. A thoughtful write. Thanks for sharing.

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Md Asadullah 01 September 2014

Yes, indeed! Humans have got destructive minds, inventions needs to be utilized in constructive ways, aeroplanes are used to drop bombs which kills many which is so bad, thanks for sharing this poem Aftab bhai :)

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Akhtar Jawad 01 September 2014

Nature has created every thing for a positive purpose but we the human beings use it in negative purposes. A nice write.

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Kanniappan Kanniappan 01 September 2014

We human; keep the mind of destruction, And nature, calls for love and construction, - Nice sonnet with very good message and rhymes.

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