Sunday, June 6, 2010

Death- Close Your Eyes Comments

Rating: 3.8

Crimson falls,
And the loved ones all bawl.
The silent Twilight's call.
The man upon the gray rock comes,
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ayam Rose Estelle
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Leila Mass 18 June 2010

This is really good I like it. I know that being young (I'm the same age as you) makes people not take you as seriously but that shouldn't stop you from writing :) feel free to read any of my poems.

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David Hayes 12 June 2010

Not bad, I like it!

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Broken Heart 07 June 2010

Nice poem! !

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ayam Rose Estelle

ayam Rose Estelle

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