Tuesday, January 8, 2008

Death Clock Comments

Rating: 5.0

I started to pen
The clock ticked again
My heart beat again
Pain tangled my brain
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sania harris
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juniad Ahmad 30 November 2020

can imagine the clock ticking to the rhythm of the poem. very nice sania.

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Sebastine Humaemo 21 December 2008

can see much maturity in your poems.....great works.....sebastine

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Min Sia 10 November 2008

Maturity is in your dearly hands! ! ! A 10! ! ! It's really beautiful! ! !

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Ivor Hogg 08 October 2008

A powerful piece of writing mature from the pen of pne so young

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alice sunderland 07 October 2008

can imagine the clock ticking to the rhythm of the poem. very nice sania.

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