Death Came Comments

keep living.. death is patient. nice poem.. a ten

I love the thought in this poem...a good strong write...thank you so much for sharing it...Fi

I liked this poem and gave it a ten rating. How ever i think that the last verse 'until i will to be free. ' should probably sound better if it read ' until then, i will be free', or 'until then i shall remain free'. God bless all poets-MJG.

Our fate lies in the hands of the so called angel of death..thats he is the only one who knows when our time comes...beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing 10+++

very very nice poem i like +10