Monday, July 6, 2009

Death-Call Comments

Rating: 5.0

A day's light is still on,
A breeze is blowing on.
I am lying silently,
I am looking helplessly.
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Sanjib Das
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Luwi Habte 28 September 2009

oh, seeing sarwar surprised and sad after he saw Anjali crieng, lol the poem is so cool, love the rhytm nice piece poet there luwi

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Sarwar Chowdhury 06 July 2009

Ooooooh! seeing anjali crying below my eyes moist with......! whatever, sanjib, you penned a pictograph greatly! 10+

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Anjali Sinha 06 July 2009

hey what a sad poem dear why write like this im feel like crying though the style is nice the contents make me cry -10 anjali

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