Thursday, August 14, 2014

Death By Suicide Comments

Rating: 5.0

Death by suicide
What a selfish way to die
No faith No hope
No love No joy
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Guy Dimitri Jagodinski
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Athena Hood 27 September 2014

This is a great poem, a beautifully written one! I agree with every assertion you have written here. Thanks for sharing this. I hope that those on the verge of committing suicide will stumble upon this poem and change their minds.

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Khairul Ahsan 14 August 2014

I must congratulate you for writing this beautiful piece of poetry. I couldn't agree more with you in saying that: 'They think of only themselves and their suffering They forget the shame of their families The pain and guilt they leave behind'. My thoughts are fully congruent with yours when you say: 'Wasted is the life of growing old And seeing your children succeed Wasted is the love Of your friends and families Wasted is your reputation Of being strong and courageous Death by Suicide Is no way to die Any glorification is surely a lie'. Your last two lines are a priceless advice: 'Before you say goodbye Seek God to be by your side'. A classic poem - 10/10.

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