Friday, March 10, 2006

Death By Retail Comments

Rating: 0.0

Sunday, shopping, spouse spendthrift, strict stratagem,
Swedish style, specialist storehouse. streamlined, stimulating.
Searching, seeking, spouse stressful, spotted sink,
Superior, shiny, sterile, stainless steel, spectacular!
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Teedy Dawn
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Max Reif 10 March 2006

Well, I'm amused! You do tersely communicate the staccato change of situation and 'spousal reactions'. Wonder whether there's a poetics reason you chose 's' instead of, say, 'r', or 'd'?

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