Monday, October 20, 2008

Death By Love Comments

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I am broken and in despair,
and yet she laughs has not to care.
I cannot help but feel Ive wronged,
in such a dismal stay.
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Saint Cynosure
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Peter Webb 27 November 2008

I was drawn into your poem by the first two lines.....awesome.

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*Trusting You* 23 October 2008

I like the last 2 lines their great! the most horrible things happen to the most wonderful people. Becca

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totally disturbed 21 October 2008

How could someone not want to be with you...

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ppp sss 21 October 2008

A very relatable write. Having gone through this type of stage I can only say, it will get better, maybe not much, but it will get better.

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