Tuesday, January 6, 2009

Death Bed (Letter To The Mother) Comments

Rating: 5.0

MOMMY I AM SICK
I REALLY DONT WANT TO LEAVE YOU
BUT PLEASE UNDERSTAND WHAT IM GOING THRU
MY WISH FOR YOU IS NEVER TO CRY
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LUZAAN de Bruyn
COMMENTS

oh so sad... a very dramatic scene... well written poem... thanks for sharing

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 06 January 2009

so touching, thanks for sharing

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Sabrina Jubahar 06 January 2009

This is an emotional piece. Soo.. heart crunching and pure and honest. This is good, Luz!

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Vaibhav Pandey 06 January 2009

very emotional poem.... I loved it.

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Fay Slimm 06 January 2009

Luzaan - - this is a very strong subject to deal with and you have attempted it with courage, consideration and delicacy........ well written indeed,

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