Thursday, September 25, 2008

Death Bed Comments

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Tonight is the night,
Her heart is breaking.
I'm sure you can hear her cries
From all the pain she feels inside.
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Brianna Wilshusen
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Ershad Mazumder 07 October 2008

Very narrative and descriptive. Love is word that does need so much narration to express.Read again and again for further editing.

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