Thursday, August 13, 2009

Death, Be Gentle. Comments

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Take from me only that which i wasted,
desecrate this body if you feel necessary,
but take my soul gently when my time ends and this image is faded,
it was time that existed any ways, so the image you saw was just a mirage in times capsule formulated,
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Shueyb Boyer
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Lycko Chizo 23 August 2009

I like the your poem so much! I can totally relate to it. I love the idea, the diction, the depth of your poem. Kinda similar to my 'Seeking Death'

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Winnie Angel 15 August 2009

Thoughtful! .... Great soul rest in every living body.... Winnie

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Leah Ayliffe 13 August 2009

powerful, enjoyed it

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Shueyb Boyer

Shueyb Boyer

Paramaribo, Suriname
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