Death At Mulago Comments

Her hands cross her chest And the message unsaid Crushing granite and concrete In gushing tears of pain And a lonely sorrow.Congratulations being chosen as The Modern OPoem Of The Day! 5 Stars full

Fullstop in breath ending the path of life no power avails in this regard no wealth avails in this regard flat everywhere flat death roots absorbs the pathos of all earthly life.........

Sorrow of death in the midst of affluence and it's shock marvelously depicted. Well deserved modern poem of the day.

Death! ! Tears of pain; Lonely sorrow. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Her hands cross her chest And the message unsaid Crushing granite and concrete In gushing tears of pain And a lonely sorrow. very good poem. tony

THIS POEM IS VERY NICE KEEP IT UP MR DAVID RUBADIRI

i like the message and the way he brings about the sorrow of death