Death And Man Comments

'somehow, be sure, you will be found' wow, this is just amazing, I loved the idea, the words and the way you expressed yourself. Your tone is sad and heartbreaking yet very convincing; it's a poem every one can and should relate to. After all we can't 'escape' death but we can seiz the moment and be the children of 'today'. Great job from such a great poet

A beautiful poem indeed, well penned, brooding is ever opening the doors of perception. Good luck!

Death, ahhh I now deep, dark and scary for many. For me, not scary at all, I see death in a different light, I see it as a beginning of a new life, an eternal life, leaving the testing grounds to go beyond and into a life of peace and freedom, a tranquil paradise. I see no fear in death only beauty of moving on. I was so blessed to be present at the death of my husband and what took place was so absolutely beautifu, if I had fear then all fear was removed then, and I thank God for showing me that peace. You wrote a very good poerm here, thankyou once again. (10)

This poem sounds musical and full of meaning. It is evocative because it points out something inevitable.

I really had a really wonderful interest while I was reading your poem..... well simply it is very fantastic...... full of meanings and emotions..... great poem it is really worth reading..... telling about the fact that no one could ever run away from it.... taking you to better or worse second ever lasting life.... thanks for sharing and keep it up..... Diana

Death is inevitable........but life is worthwhile.

death will come wherever and whenever.. death doesn't care about time or place.. great poem..

yes so true.. I like this very serious and real Krista

life and death is like brothers n sisters.Well penned Blue eyes.

yes everyone is going to die and there is no escaping thats why you should live everyday to its fullest, another great poem tho....10

The secret my young boy, is enjoy very much our life. Because where life is, death is not.

its very moving. true art id say

I certainly got your point in the poem that no matter who we are we get checked out eventually. I sometimes look at important people (or those who think they are) knowing it will end for them as well as me. However, I do think we should life with compassion for others and enjoy the gift of life we have been given. You expressed your opinion strongly in this piece and the writing is unique so thank you Blue Eyes......Karin Anderson

Very vivid and descriptive. You write with much creative energy. Though I must say that I have a very different concept of death. To me, it is closing one's eyes in one world and waking up in another.Wishing you a very happy and productive 2009. Kindest regards, Sandra

words of truth and wisdom...good rhyming...the first stanza lines i liked most...good piece...10

I like this a lot. Definitely a 9+. Again, very good rhyming and an interesting concept. =)

Blue eyes The rhyme scheme got a bit dodge, thnk it tricked u a bit. Otherwise the poem on the overall, i heard u CLEARLY! ! ! true how one can fall victim to the ups n downs n evils of ths world [liked the lines..death with a yellow smile(nice imagery) ...slaughter n take away ur soul(very graphic) ] word

an interesting consideration...the grim reaper is always on one's tail, and takes no rest in chasing down his victims...once one is in his grasp, there is no escape or path leading backwards...death has no mercy and never did...nicely rhymed, good job. lc

excellent.... there is always a reason to why we r put into this world....... no matter how much some of us want to go back there is no way cause there is only going foward...... i like this

ths poem s very beautiful...death has a charm, , , once u got caught...hah....no more chance, , , take care..