And death once told a much defeated life:
Life is no life if lived on edge of knife,
If struggles for survivals soaked in strife,
You see, life comes with many a death rife.
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A wonderful piece of work carrying great substance sir. Each stanza is a poem itself! Your sixth stanza is my favorite one......10
It appears you have read it thoroughly, thanks for appreciation
A journey of countless births starts with life, That ends when death is triumphed over strife./// really great writings; masterly crafted life is everything and makes a journey to its eternity, the death
Thank you dear MB, you're absolutely right, without death this journey can'; t be eternal.
Life is no life if lived on edge of knife, Life lives on a daily dose of strife rife.... //.... Exquisitely crafted poem with great insights into the philosophy of life and death. Reading it was a pleasure as well as a journey towards enlightenment. Thanks for sharing.
'Journey towards enlightenment', thanks for these comments, I feel humbled coming as they are from a great poet himself. Thanks.
Rife! ! Death! Birth and life; Only to die one day. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Thanks for visiting with your marvelous input