Friday, November 5, 2010

Death, A Coward Comments

Rating: 4.3

When they feel fog before their eyes,
when throat has a strange suffocation,
The truth overpowers all the lies,
Men get from all duties a redemption.
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir
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Kevin Carney 27 January 2011

Coward before death, is the solution final redemtion that he might achieve. If he says he doesn't care not only a coward but a fool. Great write thank you for sharing.10

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Ata Ata 06 December 2010

Everybody is coward with death, only stupid one could say; ' I don't care'. This poem woke up my memory and I was coward too.Thanks for sharing your thoughts through poetry.

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Romeo Della Valle 15 November 2010

The truth will always overcome lies and time will tell. A very poignant and well penned write. Keep it up! 10+++ Love and Peace...

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Bert Bell 07 November 2010

This is a very well thought out poem about a difficult subject, death. You have described it well with nice texture and imagery. Very nice indeed.10

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Linda Kessler 07 November 2010

I think your poem has very strong emotion. it is very well written :)

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 November 2010

Fear of the arch rival comes to fore, Nothing works whether it is heart or mind, .........nice poem with lovely message...10 before you could find cover it has taken you over you had no time left to decide you were on ground and simple tied in few minutes to be consigned to flames not all to be cursed or blamed it has come at the right time and at place you had lost all the opportunities and race f

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Deep Thoughts 07 November 2010

Truth overpower lies......very much so. Great poem.

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Hd Whatley 06 November 2010

Truth does overpower all the lies. Well written. Subtle but strong.

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir

Mohammad Akmal Nazir

Bahraich, U.P. India
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