Death Comments
There came death again and took one of us away
It flashed and took the senses from some of us away
It turned into a wave on the waiting beach of life
It washed another name inscribed in sand away
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Just the sad realities of life, touching my heart deeply with these lines of yours. Thanks for sharing.
Death does keep coming again and again, taking away those we love. The pain we're left with hurts our hearts and souls forever, yet one day too, death will take us away. Realistic poem on death and it's effects on us all. Very well written, great imagery! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn
A rabid and realistic river of realization that tells the truths about death.
it could be a second poem to translate.. if it's ok with you.. Agree?
A creative soulful poem in sea metaphor written excellently, each line crafted superbly wow. A dirge sad but nice u wrote it. Kudos. Pls do coment my latest poem too.
Many times in life there are too many challenges yet we must take each step. Death of an elderly person of course we are saddened yet often expected. But when it is the young and not someone aged it is extremely hard to accept and understand. Thank You for your words
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7/30/2025 5:18:38 PM # 1.0.0
I didn't only see it, I felt it by the power of your wording. What an excellent piece you have here about the 'quietus' in all its profundity. Thanks for writing this, please. I grew the next second upon reading.
I must thank you for reading my poem and such a comment that is poetic by itself. I really love your mastery over the language.