Death Comments

I didn't expect a 17year old to write a poem on a subject like this. But however, I was double surprised to see how deftly you have spun your thoughts on death in this poem. 'It is like your shadow, following you every where you go' True! It is nearer than the vein at the back of your neck. 'Its not the end but an inception.' - A wonderful idea!

A sublime start with a nice poem, Anusree. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

Dust to dust is a must, it's the ultimate inevitable final date that all and sundry must honour. A well articulated piece of poetry, nicely encapsulated and penned with insight. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. ➕9

A wonderfully written poem, Anusree. Thanks for sharing

Dear Anu., Your imagination and simplicity has greatly impressed me.Thanks for nice work. And thanks for your comments. Keep writing.

i cant see death, but i know its right behind me waiting for a chance... beautiful lines...10 death is reality always blessed by almighty one has to go back there is no fun in staking curse

words of Poothanam..... now Anu makes it as a slogan afraid to accept the truth, that you will die, regardless who you are.

The big problem with death it that it tends to be final. Life temporary, I choose temporary so I am going to run, but I enjoyed your poem nonetheless.

Yes, whether we fear it or not it is still going to get us all in the end isn't it? Very nicely written!

Segments of prose woven together like a collage of beauty! Loved this my dear friend :)