Death Comments
There it was a deadly silence, grasping all around!
The insects rejoiced, slowly crawling, causing yet no sound.
Pitch darkness prevailed then, all across the land!
And there walked a human figure, a lit-up lamp in his hand.
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As I read through the poem, I felt some kind of antogonist God of death was walking like as in Indian Puranas how the character Yaman/Kaalan will come to take the soul away. This poem is intense, to an extent threatening and has a wonderful ending twist! I read twice and the imagery you have created is pretty hard to go!
Death however it is described lurks around every corner and hides in every crevice. It has as a story all of its own. Sometimes it is called the Grim Reaper. The conscience is what reminds us of what is good and bad. When it dies woe to all mankind! A thought provoking write.
Death however it is described lurks around every corner and hides in every crevice. It has as a story all of its own. Sometimes it is called the Grim Reaper. The conscience is what reminds us of what is good and bad. When it dies woe to all mankind! A thought provoking write.
Death of conscience is but the death of the humanism in a human. It either dies off when the soul leaves the body or when the virtues are given up by the soul. Sir this is indeed a great work, well intrigued framing, accommodating well patterned rhyme, Great!
Death is not extinguishing the light, it is putting out the lamp because dawn has come. Muscical without sound.
Death is what this life is made up of. All other things r mere illusions which will paas one day. Only one thing remains for ever alive n young i.e. Death. :) amazing poem. Keep writing. :)
Liked this poem heaps. Great rhyming and emotive words. I wonder what he had been doing with the sword?
Death is merely a moment standing still for all eternity... Nice write, thanks for sharing...
one is amazing Really great writing I like your new style, keep it up sir
a fantastic the most terrifying poem i ever read seriously you are the brilliant of all sir just brilliant, thank you for sharing, love payal
you have a great style of writing another good piece of poetry
Wow...! ! this one is amazing. Really great writing. keep it up.
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7/29/2025 5:12:15 AM # 1.0.0
Superb writing! Simply...